Thursday, 1 September 2016

Tepaia's Egg 20m sprint Writing

Tepaia @ Pt England School: Egg 20m sprint:


WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
WALT: write an interesting recount by adding detail to the end of our sentences.

Click the link below if you want to read the exciting full story.

 - 20m egg  race


  1. Hi room 9, i like your slide that you made its really cool. Next time
    you could tell us who won the race.
    I also liked the faces you drew on the eggs.
    Thanks Eva

  2. Hi my name is Jayden
    I like the way you wrote speech bubbles to talk about the race. I bet you that would of been hard.
    Next step you could you could try do the same track and try and wine.

  3. Hi my name is Brayden I like the way you wrote "oh no you killed me" next time you could write more to describe the race and say who won it.

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